Ideas for music video

I have the idea of having to stories both with relevance to the song that create a double narrative which gradually becomes a single narrative when the stories become combined and the two half of the stories become one.

For the first half of the video we are gonna have to different  people who both want to get into the music industry but are finding it hard to do so. They will have different reasons for it being difficult.
Shots of artist close ups
shots of artists in different settings
Setting the scene establishing shot at the beginning
shots of imagery for the lyrics of the song for example "I aint got a scale so i cant wait on it"
shots establishing the artist clothes close ups, mid shots and then long shots
Shots of iconic scenery around London to show a journey.