For our music video we had the chance to get feedback from our classmates to help us improve our production our video got mainly negative feedback from my pears as the draft was incomplete in places and the confusion with the two artsist made video hard to understand
Positives:
The costume of the artists was appropriate
Good choice of locations
Nice use of props
Good imagery
Good matching of Lyrics and visuals

Negatives:
Story was not clear no clear narrative
Two artsist's confused viewers
Lighting in some of the shots
Bad lip-syncing
Gaps in the video

From the feedback we got it was clear we where gonna have to only use one artist so we cut one of our artists and filmed some more footage to fill the gap that was left behind by that. Also we tried to fix the lip-syncing in the edit so that most of the video is in sync however it was hard because our artist has a language barrier and english isn't his only language we overcame this as best as we could by doing multiple shoots of the the shame shot to get the best one. With the lighting afte we gt rid of the inside scenes the problem with lighting was gone so that problem was fixed.